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There is a place
A special place, where plans are crashed and
Dreams come true

A place where
I would want to be forever
But I can't reach it

I see it everyday
I can't move closer
Because I am trapped

Trapped within my own memories
Moments of pain and suffering
Would it ever end?

I can't do this alone
But then you appear
With a smile on your face every time

Always wondered what made you happy
Till you told me
"I am happy because you make me happy."

You hugged me for a long time
What ran though my mind started to make sense
My pain and suffering was drifting away

There was someone who care enough
Someone who wanted to help
Someone that wants you feel a change from within

A place where
Plans are crashed while dreams blossom
That place was you
A place where dreams do come true, have you found that place?
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FoxofArrows Oct 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice and inspiring. A few grammatical errors here and there, but still nice.
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AkashasDreamworld Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very cute, emotions whine through brilliantly. Nice work!! (:

-Avy
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magic6jewls Oct 16, 2012  Student Writer
Sweet poem. As in really sweet. A nice story that could be easily followed and awesome stanza cuts. But I felt like there could've been more imagery. Other than that, artfully written :)
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